I had paid a former Script Doctor who worked in Los Angeles back in the 1980's. (Gee, a long time ago). She read all 4 of my murder mystery screenplays and gave me good advice. I got a plus for originality. I was thrashed for TRIBAL COP, but it can be re-written into something better. My next actor table read and discussion with INTO DARKNESS will be Saturday April 1, 2017. (Below is my script doctor's rankings).
- Ambush.
- Into Darkness.
- Cold Dark Wind.
- Tribal Cop.
Logline: A Navajo male went missing for 7 months. His dead body was found in the desert. His murder opens an investigation by two Tribal officers. They run into the FBI, a Hitman and a wife who goes missing. Meanwhile, a mysterious dog drags Navajo toddlers into the darkness...,
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